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Table of contents
1 Front Matter
2 Just In

2.1 September 1
2.2 August 31
2.3 August 30
2.4 August 29
2.5 August 28
2.6 August 27
2.7 August 26
2.8 August 25
2.9 August 24

3 More than a week old

3.1 August 23
3.2 August 22
3.3 August 21
3.4 August 20
3.5 August 19
3.6 August 18
3.7 August 17

4 More than two weeks old

4.1 August 16
4.2 August 15
4.3 August 14
4.4 August 13
4.5 August 12
4.6 August 11
4.7 August 10

5 More than 3 weeks old

5.1 August 9
5.2 August 8
5.3 August 7
5.4 August 6
5.5 August 5
5.6 August 4
5.7 August 3
5.8 August 2
5.9 August 1
5.10 July 31
5.11 July 30
5.12 July 29

6 More than a month old

6.1 July 27-28
6.2 July 26
6.3 July 25
6.4 July 24
6.5 July 23
6.6 July 22
6.7 July 21
6.8 July 20
6.9 July 19
6.10 July 18
6.11 July 16-17
6.12 July 15

7 More than 6 weeks old

7.1 July 13-14
7.2 July 11-12
7.3 July 9-10
7.4 July 7-8
7.5 July 5-6
7.6 July 2-4
7.7 July 1

8 More than two months old
9 Leftovers
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Front Matter

Please read Ireland Information Guide:Cleanup process for instructions on maintaining this page. In short, be brief, no timestamps, and remember to remove listings once stated problems have been resolved.

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Just In

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September 1

  • {South Asia} template is ugly as an "edit" is in the caption. Please remove the "edit". See it at the bottom on the India page. ¶ ɳȉčḩåḽṗ | ✉ 20:32, Sep 1, 2004 (UTC)
  • Vassilakis - needs tons of work and a major POV-ectomy. Also at wrong title. RickK 19:53, Sep 1, 2004 (UTC)
  • Helen Elliott Bandini - needs wikification
  • Sit-up.tv Is it notable? Vfd?
  • Meaning Needs formatting, more encyclopedic style, someone who can explain the 'alternate approach' a little better. -- Sparky the Seventh Chaos
  • Picturesw this was speedied before, a bit short and a bit icky. Dunc_Harris|☺
  • List of university libraries - needs a massive expansion (i.e. there are more than 10 notable university libraries in this world) --Szyslak
  • Fresh off the boat seems to need a look for potential POV issues. ffirehorse
  • Peace breaker's muzzle - wikify Peter O. (Talk)
  • Politics of the Maldives - minor POV issue; see Information Guide.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Politics_of_the_Maldives&diff=0&oldid=5516707 this diff (http://en.Ireland). Peter O. (Talk)
  • Nominalism - needs encyclopedic tone. Peter O. (Talk)
  • Spell
  • Melodeon needs wikifying.
  • Kennebecasis Valley needs wikifying.
  • Quba needs expansion Lacrimosus
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August 31

  • Grammatical particle. A muddled description of English particles, followed by a long list of words (which are what exactly? The content of the list seems to imply that everything that isn't a noun, verb, adjective, or adverb can be considered a particle). I tacked on a bit at the very end about how particles actually exist in languages other than English, and I grouped the long list of particles by parts of speech, but this page really needs some more work. -Sewing - talk 23:34, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Infini-D computer program. need to establish notability. Dunc_Harris|☺ 15:28, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Self-respect minimal stub. Dunc_Harris|☺ 15:14, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • COX-2 selective inhibitor - this is either original research, a clever copyvio, or a combination. Either way, it is unwikified and densely written. JFW | T@lk
    • The original author claims it is an original work. See my talk page. KeithTyler 18:22, Sep 1, 2004 (UTC)
  • Paschen curve: unwikified
  • Outcome-based education has draft/editorial notes lying around in the middle of what is posted finished text and hasn't been touched by anyone since 12.23.2003. ffirehorse
    • Not to mention some serious POV problems - opponents are described as "conservative advocates of liberty." Not to be confused with liberal opponents of liberty. --Szyslak
  • List of Japanese erotic actresses wikify
  • Herbert McClintock - unwikified
  • Jason Lee Scott - lots of grammatical errors. + fixed tense, still needs better context—Rory ☺ 23:45, Aug 31, 2004 (UTC)
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August 30

  • Azteca Airlines - stubbish, ad-like. Thought it was a copyvio. - Lucky 6.9 23:15, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Sherman of Arabia - does this need its own article? Plus, needs context -- that stub notice at the bottom doesn't cut it. Merged into main The Critic article -- Netoholic @ 05:09, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Image server - unwikified.
    • wikified some, but could still do with a look over by someone more familiar with the subject. Rho
  • Shaggy 2 Dope: not sure if this is for real- but either way, it is unwikified and WAY too colloquial.
    • He's a clown rapper and occasional pro wrestler. It's for real; I saw him in concert. grendel|khan 20:36, 2004 Aug 30 (UTC)
  • Battle of Hypori - needs to be in line with other Star Wars articles. Blue Mask|Talk 16:57, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Battle Cry - general cleanup needed. Blue Mask|Talk 16:41, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Baratie - context? Blue Mask|Talk 16:31, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Bandstand (Australia) - candidate for delete? Blue Mask|Talk 16:27, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Hurricane Inez:unwikified+needs spellcheck
    • Ran it through Word, wikified a little. Sparky the Seventh Chaos 20:58, Aug 30, 2004 (UTC)
  • High explosive anti-tank - lots of good info, needs to be divided into sections. - Ta bu shi da yu 14:07, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Italian unification needs to have a heap of purple prose removed and to be made more encyclopaedic and checked for NPOV. Rho
  • Electronic meeting system - Cleaned up a bit, but still needs to be broken down. --Slowking Man 07:57, Aug 30, 2004 (UTC)
  • Fritz Kohn: Disorganized and partially unwikified. -Frazzydee|✍ 04:16, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Portabello Eggs This article needs to be transwikied over to Wikibooks: Cookbook. Thank you. :) Sean 02:27, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • European Education Forum This seems either outdated (it references a 2003 conference and has no updated information) or possibly POV/unencyclopedic (unless it can be updated, expanded, etc.) ffirehorse
  • Italo Calvino/Italian Folktales - a sub-page of Italo Calvino, merge, if this is true, and redirect or delete. Nabla
  • Orion (names) makes little sense.
  • Childlove movement - we badly need to here criticisms of the movement in the article, we need to remove numerous weasel words, we need a psychologist to edit this stuff to explain the effect of pedophilia on children. See Talk:Childlove movement#Weasel words Ta bu shi da yu 11:27, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • 2008 - March 28th mentions "Sunday. The Death of Edgar Ham Louise." Was this done by a vandal? (This was entered by someone using IP 24.15.64.67) Aecis
  • You reckon that's odd? Check out the year 3000: it says:
After 998 years, the sequel of "Blackadder goes Back and Forth" finally will enter the cinemas. All they could come with as title in nearly a millenium is "Blackadder goes Back and Forth 2"
- Ta bu shi da yu 14:14, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • The categories and deal with the same subject. I suggest moving the content of Cities in the Netherlands to Dutch cities, since the latter contains more articles than the former. Cities in the Netherlands could then be deleted. (hyperlinks don't seem to work here) Aecis 16:45, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
    • I prefer "Cities in the Netherlands"; the title Dutch cities might suggest that the cities listed include those from Belgium. Peter O. (Talk) 05:02, Aug 31, 2004 (UTC)
  • Janos Audron, The time streamer - anybody any idea what universe this is from? DJ Clayworth 17:07, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)

They are from the Legacy of Kain video game universe. I can't find an article for that game, but we have articles on other characters, such as Kain and Raziel. Academic Challenger 01:55, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC)

  • Melon - looks like the Article that Time Forgot
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August 29

  • Churn (album) - unwikified, created by a vandal, could somebody verify it?
  • Dr. d'Armond Speers - needs general cleanup - then again, this might be a vanity case for vfd --DMG413 21:50, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Royal Asiatic Society - unwikified, nonstandard format
  • Image:Physicalmapdots.jpg - used on Thirty most populous cities in the world, but there is a dot on this map apparently for St. Petersburg, which is not listed on the article as being one of the 30 most populous cities.
  • Kapila - context? time? Founder of samkhya? Mythology? Andries 15:49, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Dominic de Guzman - Large chunk of PD text inserted from Project Gutenburg book (see reference). Needs wiki links, sub edit and cutting down in size. Tagishsimon
  • E. Sue Savage-Rumbaugh Text dump. Should be checked for POV. Correct name for the article should be researched. _R_
  • Zebra mussel Poorly written. Almost a stub. Needs wikifying, checking for typos zegoma_beach (talk) + I did some typo checks. ffirehorse 05:45, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Cisie A diacritical disaster. --Sesel 07:43, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Meir Har-Zion: Meir Har-Zion is a known Israeli commando, but instead of biography this article contains nothing but anti-Sharon gruch. The content need to be replace with a proper biography. MathKnight 12:19, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Small business - The section "Problems faced by small businesses" is kinda unencylopedic. Fuelbottle | Talk
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August 28

  • Michael Berumen -needs organising (article is one long paragraph)+ done but -needs to be deorphaned
  • Jastrowie - wikification, clarification Andre
  • Ancient trackways - would make an intersting article on British trackways, but currently very 1st person anecdotal style, also needs renaming Ianb - Just use the move tool tomove it; no cut-and-paste moves.
  • Philip Marlowe - decent stub, but could use a loving copyedit for flow, and there's so much more to be said about the character; also need help with the choice of vocabulary
  • Knights of Father Matthew - fmt, substub
  • Forrest Carter - Major POV work by ignoring vast segments of Carter's real history - Went back and did some work on it.
  • Alexandria class cruiser - needs to be wikified, needs to be written as an encyclopedia article, needs to indicate what universe it takes place in, needs to have image removed until an actual image is available to put there. - There is no image because I don't know how to place an image. I'm hoping someone will do that for me so I can see what they did and learn from it.
  • Kylie Travis - I deleted something which said she is married to Eddie Vedder. I can't find anything but Ireland Information Guide mirrors to justify this. Can somebody verify it? - It seems to be nonsense. An article in the Journal News based in Westchester County states she is married to developer Louis Capelli and Donald Trump introduced them. [1] (http://www.nynews.com/newsroom/081704/b0117renaissance.html) I have added link to IMDB and correct marriage information to article as stub Capitalistroadster
  • The N3 - uniwkified. Maybe move to South Africa Highway N3 or some other official title? - Just use the move tool tomove it; no cut-and-paste moves. - I know HOW to move it, I don't know the official name of the highway.
I have never heard of a more official name than "N3". Moved to N3 highway, South Africa. Still needs cleanup. —AlanBarrett 22:01, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Puffy_Amiyumi - a Japanese pop group. Peter O. (Talk)
  • Candied yams - just a recipe, but it deserves an article Guanaco
  • Middle America (U.S.) - first off, "Middle America" has somewhat pejorative connotations (at least here in the East) so I think the article should be renamed, though I don't know exactly what to call "non-coastal" America. Secondly, there are tons of redlinks, such as bicoastal and snow boom. - Maybe move it to Flyover states? RickK - Just use the move tool tomove it; no cut-and-paste moves.
  • Mia - A dice game, basically a how-to-play at present. RedWordSmith
  • Managee - just an ad at present seglea
  • Brigadeiro - needs format fixing and wikification, plus that recipe should be transwikied to the cookbooks section of Wikibooks. Livajo
  • Tláhuac. Travel invitation mixed into text. VV
  • Xerocracy. VV
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August 27

  • Abrahamic God - substub; says something that probably needs saying, but POV and overlap with existing articles need looking at seglea
  • Meow Wars - needs expansion (what the heck happened? What's the "Raoul Xemblinosky" section doing there?), npovification — Gwalla | Talk
  • all pages from Discontinued palmOne Handhelds -- POV. Dunc_Harris|☺
  • Ranganatha Swami temple - needs wikifying and structure. Andre
  • The Lizard King - needs wikifying and quite a lot of de-POVing, along with some discernible structure. [[User:Mike Storm|Mike

∞Storm]

I found the text hopeless so I put it in [Information Guide.org/wiki/Talk:The_Lizard_King Talk (http://en.Ireland)]. Help is welcome. Mashford 03:26, 29 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Marshall McLuhan - an anon has spent the last several days adding a massive unwikified paragraph into the middle of the article. Reads like it was copied from somewhere else, but I can't find where. Has made it to one mirror of Ireland Information Guide already. RickK +Much hacked and much dumped as unrecoverable NPOV, or too clever by half. I *think* what we see here is a media student's essay. C-, could do better --Tagishsimon
Not sure where to start with this. The midsection seems to be more about Neil Postman and Harold Innis than McLuhan. ffirehorse 22:21, 28 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Representative sequences - well they're sequences, and they're representative, but of what is completely missing. Dunc_Harris|☺
  • List of failed comic strips - This needs much cleanup than I can give it. Could someone help? Thanks. Mike H
  • Alexis Arguello, Aaron Pryor - Competitors of Battle of the Champions, which I have just cleaned up. Both articles should be checked for POV. Peter O. (Talk)
  • Filmmaking -- needs rewriting as prose rather than bulleted lists. —No-One Jones
  • All buildings in Category:Columbus, Indiana -- I have found some US govt text, but there's quite a lot of it that needs wikifying. Dunc_Harris|☺
  • SMD - substub, related to surface-mount technology Rvollmert
  • GetCheapBooks - may or may not be notable, but certainly reads like an add
  • HNoMS Rap - almost a stub. Needs wikifying, checking for typos. WegianWarrior
  • Vibhajyavada - written by non-native English speaker, needs somebody to make some sense of it.
  • Bag of Bones - breezy, first-person POV about the Stephen King novel; it's more story review and opinion than encyclopedia article.
  • Evan Forde - copied from http://www.aoml.noaa.gov/od/people/forde/, whcih makes it public domain, but it hasn't been wikified.
  • Sant Kirpal Singh - "overwiked"; also needs neutering Mikkalai
  • Gene Starwind doesn't need the plot spoilers and does need improved information about the character. —Triskaideka
  • Type R - Lots of juicy goodness for the Honda and Acura fans among us. I thought it was a copyvio, but I get no hits. Unwikied text dump written like an automotive review. Major POV-ectomy required as well a rewrite from a world standpoint instead of a UK one. Plenty of info to work with. Beats substubs to hell! - Lucky 6.9
  • Karoubi envelope - needs help with math formatting. Diberri | Talk
  • Mir Babr Ali Anis - Rough. Needs work. --LeeHunter
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August 26

  • RaD Man - This is looking for some additional detail. Checking the ACiD site for context.
  • Redass - real Canadian ball game? Needs wikification, at the very least. Diberri | Talk
  • The Lost Skeleton of Cadavra - needs formatting. Diberri | Talk
  • Bindu -substub
  • Seven Persons Canadian hamlet. Dunc_Harris|☺
  • Weasel war dance Huh?
Why would a ferret do a weasel dance? I think it would do something 'stoatly' different like a ferret dance! If a Zoologist does not clean up and explain, some one should delete but be careful because they bite Giano
  • Election Results, Montgomery County, Ohio, Coroner substub; relevance?
  • Joey Potter - supposed to be about a character in Dawson's Creek, but is actually about almost everything that happens in the series, as well as containing lots of minor errors. Deb
  • Jim Ogston still needs tidy and establishment of notability. Dunc_Harris|☺
  • Kazan 1) Written by non-native speaker (needs copyedit), 2) Curious POV Ornil. Have tidied up somewhat - may need some more work on it. Jackiespeel
  • Dagami Needs copyediting and wikification. Livajo
  • Ars Theurgia Goetia lacks context. Needs work. ffirehorse
  • Divine Word dicdef, + Made into disambig page. Smerdis of Tlön
  • Drdo Indian Army.Dunc_Harris|☺
  • Zonguldak Province. A mess. Image may be a copyvio.
  • Communicatio idiomatum sthg to do w/ Christianity. makes little sense, so nothing new there then. Dunc_Harris|☺
Someone has copied the first two sentences of the Catholic Encyclopedia text (public domain, so no copyvio), and left out the 15o or so sentences that actually explain the concept. I've expanded it; it's an interesting concept for those of us who are so inclined. I haven't removed the cleanup tag - it makes a lot of sense to me, since it fits nicely into my view of the Incarnation, but could anyone with less knowledge of theology see if it makes any to them? Cnyborg
Makes sense to me. Good work. ffirehorse
  • Astrodynamics - someone added a huge block of unwikified text into it about a month ago, looks like a copyvio to me but I can't find it on the web. If it's not, it needs a good cleanup. Stormie
  • SCP-ISM needs copyedit, context, probably an expert review
  • Gardia (Nicaragua) - context. Diberri | Talk
  • Belly (band) - cleanup, wikify, NPOV - MattTM
  • Diseases of the nails - needs context and examples. Diberri | Talk
  • Kvener - grammar is unclear: people or peoples? Burschik
I think this needs to be split in two; the article covers both a mythological/semi-mythological people in Finland, and an ethnic minority in Norway. It might be appropriate to mentioned the other meaning briefly in each article, but I think they deserve separate entries. I can turn it into two coherent entries (expanding the bit about the Norwegian minority somewhat), but I need a suggestion on naming them. Cnyborg
  • Killing spinor -- Mathematical term that needs a clear definition. SWAdair | Talk
Cleaned up and clarified a lot, but still needs a good lookover from someone really expert in supergravity/superstring theory or related fields. Bhugh
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August 25

RaD Man - unwikfied, POV

Brain fingerprinting - needs context. Diberri | Talk

2 Gryphon: - Requires someone with knowledge of 2, The Ranting Gryphon's rants and shows to include alot more information

Disordered eating a useful Dartmouth College article. Dunc_Harris|☺

Troop - incomplete; only discusses UK troops. Peter O. (Talk)

ARTISTdirect - some POV issues. Peter O. (Talk)

Dick and Dom about some CBBC show. Is currently a sub-stub. Lupo

Tom Verlaine discography needs formatting, unclear whether these are solo albums Rvollmert

Suspension bondage make it less of a how-to. From VFD. DJ Clayworth

Critical thinking - consists mostly of bullet points, reads like a how-to.—Rory ☺

RFA Bishopsdale (A128) - Empty table User:Krik/norm

Follow The Reaper - same as above JamesMLane - should probably be at Follow the Reaper, but is this group notable?

Timeline of liberal parties in the Czech lands - Needs a lot of work on formatting, it is practically impossible to follow. Darksun

British Free Corps — very long, no headings, gave up trying to follow it, as I know little about the subject matter. — OwenBlacker

Activist magazine - Reads like an advertisement with no significant wikification and LOTS of external links to the magazine. Kevin Rector

Appears to be about the Against Cruise Testing coalition. Peter O. (Talk) 02:15, Sep 1, 2004 (UTC)

Kanterovich inequality - Needs some context, right now it's nothing but a formula --Fenice

Expanded, did some work but the article could use some review by someone who actually knows the field (math--vector spaces, linear algebra, matrix theory, etc.). Bhugh

Hawazma - needs wikifying, grammar improvement, has interesting information on an Arab tribe living in Sudan - (I started cleaning it up, but the user who wrote it reverted it. He's still working on it) --Fenice

2 Gryphon - Need alot more information. And a fan of 2, the Ranting Gryphon with alot of time on his/her hands to put some thought into it. It is mearly a reference to him.

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August 24

Soviet-German cooperation: no header, needs rewording

Push-pull factors for colonists: unwikified. It also reeks of copyvio, but I can't seem to find any evidence. Probably a student's essay. Information Guide.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=DetroitSportsFan12 The contributions of DetroitSportsFan12 (http://en.Ireland)

Alcohol Without Liquid Dunc_Harris|☺ 22:06, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Buffalo Blizzard some minorly notable five-a-side football team. Dunc_Harris|☺ 21:47, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Destination Imagination Dartmouth College contribution; needs tidy, establishment of notability. vfd if not improved. Dunc_Harris|☺ 21:37, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

The Man This is probably borderline VfD material, but maybe someone can salvage it. It could be an interesting read if it documented the origin and notable uses of the term. As it stands now, the largest portion of this article is a quote from a movie. Contains fair amount of POV, e.g. "would be rebels". Taco Deposit | Talk-o Deposit 20:49, Aug 24, 2004 (UTC)

I added material about origins and usage of term over the decades. ffirehorse 22:11, 28 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Heuijong of Korea -- Curps + attempted wikifying Srd2005 21:01, 19 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Moved to King Huijong of Goryeo (to conform with how other Korean monarchs' articles are titled), but still needs cleanup. -山道子 (Sewing) - talk 19:58, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Haverstraw - there are several articles about different locations called Haverstraw, New York. This apparently belongs to one of them, but which one? - this one: Haverstraw (village), New York, to which I've moved its contents: they can be cleaned up there.

Lord Hannay of Chiswick - unwikified mess, seems to be an informal essay outline Andre 19:24, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Mocatta unwikified text dump, passes google test , may be awkward article title Lady Tenar 19:06, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

List of radio stations in Veracruz-Llave not a list but an unwikified mess Lady Tenar 19:06, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Planing is a nice discussion of Hydroplaning, which unfortunately also already has an article. The two need to be merged in some intelligent way and I'm not an expert. The final version should be at Hydroplaning since planing is also something you do to wood (planing could become a disambig). While you're at it, the discussion of hydroplaning from a car safety perspective should probably be made more prominent in the article.

Bacco-22-A and Agawam (grape) - apparently types of grapes but the only mention of the word "grape" in either unwikified stub is in the title of the second one.

Nekeme Prod - Was about to VfD it, but Arkhart appears to be a real, if not notable, game. Needs cleanup if it's not going to be VfD. --Golbez 16:27, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

The organization/club making it is on VfD and failing. The VfD vote is stipulating the deletion of this, as well.

Hunter Abbey - I attempted to give it NPOV, still needs work. supadawg - Talk 15:38, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Ashur-etil-ilani - needs fact-checking and expansion

Blizzard of '77 - unwikified, not contextualized (you have to guess it's in the US and the NE), possible copyvio.

RAHOWA_(band) - substub, notable? - To VfD with it. Smerdis of Tlön 15:04, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Serdang needs wikification and more info. Livajo 11:00, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Aiyana -- needs to be made into a proper disambiguation page. Livajo 10:16, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Richard Davisson memorial to a physicist, though he seems marginally notable. Dunc_Harris|☺ 10:15, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Slovenj Gradec a city. 1 ext link. Dunc_Harris|☺ 10:12, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

MARID makes no sense to someone without knowledge of computing. Dunc_Harris|☺ 10:02, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Syntel Incorporated - badly needs wikifying and destubbifying.

Bunad - wikify, and what is a "Bunad costume"? What does it look like? Lupo

1964 Summer Paralympics, 1996 Summer Paralympics, 2000 Summer Paralympics, 1976 Winter Paralympics, 1994 Winter Paralympics, 1998 Winter Paralympics, 2002 Winter Paralympics - all have problems with overlapping/wacky tables. The 1998 Winter Games one is the closest to being okay, but still needs work.

Endocrine disruptor - focus, wikify. Lupo

Review-Anime - written by a non-native English speaker. Needs much work

  • Moved to Houshin Engi. Still a mess because I know nothing about the series. See talk page.

Jung Myung Seok - a mess, and highly POV

University of the Incarnate Word - Uhh. - was a copyvio from http://www.uiw.edu/faculty_mentoring/misstate.html, has been listed on Copyright problems

Dae Sung Lee (the rejected U.S. Olmypic Tae Kwan Do coach) article is unwikified and heavily POVed. • Benc • 05:55, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Information Guide.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=65.10.199.31 All of the contributions of User:65.10.199.31 (http://en.Ireland) - another B movie bandit

Juan_Ramón_Jiménez#Biography - not well written Peter O. (Talk) 03:53, Aug 24, 2004 (UTC) -- Cleaned up. Livajo 06:40, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Icod de los Vinos is a skeleton of an article about a Spanish town(?). Looks like an incomplete translation from the Spanish Ireland Information Guide. ¿Un traductor, por favor? • Benc • 03:03, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Goguryeo. An ancient kingdom in East Asia that is claimed by both Korea and China. Doesn't need too much work. Kokiri 17:01, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Mainly, it's just that the tables of royal names (Mandarin Chinese and Korean), which have to be merged, so that one or more columns in the main tables are for the Korean pronunciations of the names. -山道子 (Sewing) - talk 17:24, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Theoretician dicdef. Should be replaced by redirect? Awolf002 00:13, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Henchman. There seems to be some good content, but some of the sentences need to be cleaned up a bit. It shouldn't take that much work, but it might be helpful to do some fact checking. --pie4all88 22:12, 24 Aug 2004 (UTC)

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August 23

Arthur H useless substub French thingy, and all Information Guide.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=193.11.231.58 contribs of 193.11.231.58 (http://en.Ireland)

Autodesk - I just did a major rewrite, but it's still not done. Peter O. (Talk)

Epsilon Chi Chapter of KKG and all other silly Greek letter societies you can find on special:whatlinkshere/Dartmouth College merge into the original one. My head hurts. Dunc_Harris|☺

Dartmouth College Men's Varsity Swim Team marginally significant perhaps, but I'm fed up of these Dartmouth College articles. Dunc_Harris|☺

AIDS-related lymphoma - stubby and the second paragraph seems off topic. -Seth Mahoney

Craniometry - adapted from 1911 encyclopedia - needs more copyediting, and updating of language, stripping away of last shreds of 1911 worldview, fact-checking

Erste Schritte - huge, unwikied text dump. Might be copyvio, but I can't find it on Google. Also, the name doesn't match the content of the article. It seems to be about skater Eva Pawlik (sp?) - The name at the bottom of the page, Roman Seeliger, is that of the author of Die Wiener Eisrevue. Ein verklungener Traum ("The Vienna Ice Revue: A Lost Dream"), 1993. [2] (http://www.amazon.de/exec/obidos/ASIN/3700406800/qid%3D1093291221/028-8509061-2338147). I suggest the text may be from this book. Erste Schritte ("First steps"  uh, skating steps, probably) sounds a bit like a chapter title. Bishonen

John Strange Spencer Churchill Someone dropped this on us from a genealogy site: If cleaners find no notability to him, please list him on VfD. + Wikified and Cleaned: A man of no personal consequence, but as the brother of Winston Churchill, and father-in-law of his successor I suppose he is just notable Giano

Daniel Dumile Yo yo yo suckaz; hip hop thingie (AMG knows him). Also, IP who created this has created articles for each of his stage names. These should redirect back to this article, please. Only one article per performer, let's hope.

The Rockin' Bricks - yet another POV fan screed about an obscure band --Szyslak

ASCII Drawing Interchange file format - unformatted, perhaps merge with DWG? Rvollmert

Rare Earth (Music group) I pasted what an anon editor put on Rare Earth (which I made into a disambig page). Can somebody research and wikify the article? — Ilγαηερ (Tαlκ + I'll do it. ffirehorse + Attempt to co-ordinate cleanup of Cut&Paste move underway with both these editors. --Jerzy(t)

I started to make changes, but noticed the above comment re coordinating clean-up. I've reverted to the original version. ffirehorse - I encourage resuming normal cleanup. --Jerzy(t)
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August 22

Church of Spiritual Humanism: unwikified and needs general cleanup

The Medallion needs NPOVing, wikistyle Neutrality (talk)

Faucett needs work


DeDe Lind - a mess. that first sentence may be one of the most convoluted I have ever read, and I still don't understand what it says. + Made an effort to clean up the first sentence, wikify, etc. Still could use work. ffirehorse ) + Just did a major chronologization & can't believe i closed it without saving. Reconstructing. + Recostructed; last 'graph untouched & needs at least de-PoV.

Nursing school - an article about nursing schools would be good; this is very, very poor and American.

Ring finger - lots of odd little articles like this all from the same newbie. - Lucky 6.9 - And there isn't even an Index finger article. Peter O. (Talk)

San Francisco City Hall I like the photo, but know nothing about the building. Anyone want to expand? Nick

John Heffron comedian: significance? wikify, Dunc_Harris|☺

Katonah is nearly blank after removing the Michaelisms. Could someone fill in the blanks and write a stub? Guanaco

Creationism and macroevolution is POV, rambling and badly in need of formatting. - Lucky 6.9

Microplasticity - some phenomenon. Peter O. (Talk)

Irma Vep - The review at the end is inappropriate for Ireland Information Guide. Peter O. (Talk)

New_Lost_City_Ramblers - should be rewritten. Peter O. (Talk)

Der Zigeunerprimas - quite messy. I tried to fix it, but it still needs help. Node

Flood Control Act of 1944 Almost entirely a quote of the Act.
Bobblewik  (talk)

Swanscombe I've started to copyedit and wikify but it needs a lot more work. A lot of repetition, spelling, sentence structure stuff. --LeeHunter

Spytihnev II - wikify and expand? --Elf-friend

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August 21

Full United States Bomber Scale-chart - is this for real? - Ta bu shi da yu

  • Hahaha, that made me laugh for a good three minutes. Nick
    • Some part of this is admirable, however. If I was going to hand-draw something like this, it wouldn't be as good. Rhymeless
    • "I created this drawing myself, using paper, pen, etc. There are no copyright issues" very well done User:pmht

Evaluation - messy. need a disambig

Tchin-Tabaraden. Needs rewrite. Sounds a bit machine-translationy.

Punk music in Terengganu - unwikfied. Maybe should be folded into Music of Malaysia?

Control experiment could do with a more sensible example.

Glk - computer engine for interactive fiction. Really breezy, nearly unwikied but doesn't seem to be a copyvio - Lucky 6.9

Emilio Azcárraga died from lounge cancer; auto translation which makes no sense. Dunc_Harris|☺

An Ideal Husband, isn't this a book or sthg? presently useless stub of plot details and nothing else. Dunc_Harris|☺

Asheboro Zoo a um zoo. Dunc_Harris|☺ and Brevard Zoo too. Dunc_Harris|☺

Event driven what huh? Meelar (talk)

Revaluation of fixed assets, survived VfD, but in need of much help

Sadie Hawkins - expansion, general tidying, NPOV? -FZ

Sewage diver - not sure how to ask about this one on cleanup... - Ta bu shi da yu

Stone, Staffordshire - unwikified. Reads like a copyvio (complete with author's name!) - Keith Edkins

Smart windows -substub

Mass (liturgy) - Can we have a better definition at the start? And why can't we have the theology behind the mass in this article? I don't see why I should have to look up a different site for this information - if it's important (as you'd hope it would be) then lets put it in. Lastly, this got moved from Roman Mass to Mass (liturgy), and the mover says that he did this because of emotional baggage of the phrase. He then says that Mass (liturgy) is a less accurate phrase that Roman Mass. If this is the case, can we have it moved back to Roman Mass? - Ta bu shi da yu

It sounds right to include the theology behind the Mass, but in that case I would advocate moving it back to Roman Mass - if the theology is included, it should be made very clear from the beginning that this is the Roman form and understanding of Mass. I think it's sometimes unwise to move something to avoid emotional baggage in the title, as the article then often becomes more limites. There is no mention of the Anglican or Protestant Mass, even though the word is used in those churches too - the title should reflect that. Cnyborg

Sevendust - unwikified. Notable? Copyvio?

ColorRendering - unformatted. Peter O. (Talk)

Prophecy: completely credulous POV

Tophet: almost all is unwikified

Peter Lewis - libel, literally: notable figure. Can we make it NPOV by ripping it up?

Manuel Pacquiao - needs a lot of work

Mega Man - Needs to be split up into sub-articles due to its length. There is also a raw unparagraphed text dump under the Mega Man Zero - Series History-headline. Masken

I split it, but there's no way in the world I'm touching that 1750 word paragraph ~ FriedMilk 10:40, 2004 Aug 29 (UTC)
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August 20

Psychiatric Inmates' Liberation Front - notable?

Harbin Institute of Technology POV, needs wikification, maybe copyvio. Reads like a prospectus. Keith Edkins

Microscopy - An old but sorry looking article, probably needs merging with microscope

Sheep farm - author put in cleanup tag but didn't list it. Needs some serious work. Any sheep farmers about? - Ta bu shi da yu

Redbourn - Needs thorough wikification and rewrite. Portions of it are evidently quoted verbatim from a history text. ffirehorse

MM & BB - is this really necessary? - Ta bu shi da yu

St. Edward the Martyr Orthodox Church - unwikified, first person, the author left an email address

Glenn Robinson - unwikified, POV

Dartmouth college aquatic facilities - messy article

Josef Koudelka - unwikified, possible copyvio

Penny Hardaway - unwikified, needs work

Sean Avery - POV, uniwikified, reads like a copyvio.

Suffield Academy - highly POV, reads like an advertising pamphlet. Copyvio?

Espagnole sauce - not even a move to a Ireland Information Guide Cookbook would fix this recipe. Non-native English, one big block of unwikified text. Szyslak

Ben Bolt: unwikified

Damon Stoudamire - needs wikifying, NPOV help, and general grammar work. --DMG413

Our Very First Show - seems like some kind of article about Full House but has nothing to do with this topic and nothing links here - according to List of Full House episodes it is the correct title for the very first episode, so cleanup or vfd may be more appropriate. (moved from article)

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August 19

Andrés_Bello - better formatting

Alpha Chi Alpha - brace yourselves for the flood - needs a lot of wikifying, has a HUGE photo. Is this fraternity ONLY at Dartmouth?

14 Shades Of Grey - more a review than an article about the album. Needs NPOVing.

Lindsey McDonald (Angel) and Kate Lockley (Angel) - unwikfied, POV, misspeelings

  • In fact, all of the postings of User:64.78.191.206. Well written, but they need cleanup

Broadcast Storm - huh?

Giant salvinia needs a taxobox Susvolans

Raspadura - knife's edge of VfD: title probably misleading (Sp. for "scraping"), entirely dependent up.jpg|

nonofficial cover - Eh, I'll clean it up...

William M. Branham - Needs NPOV, especially the biblical quotes as argument. --Gary D


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August 18

Maxi yacht - needs fact-checking and removal of "probably". Guanaco

Liuhe Bafa. Looks like a machine translation.

Scottish National Party - Perhaps this article could be split up in Scottish National Party and History of the Scottish National Party. Just a suggestion. Aecis

Organisasi Papua Merdeka - Not really NPOV. Aecis

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August 17

Nunn-Lugar Cooperative Threat Reduction - needs formatting, wikis and a major POV-ectomy - Lucky 6.9

Ankhesenamun lacks context. Wrongly formatted etc.

Non-filter: unwikified

YOSAKOI -- weak translation, probably should be moved to Yosakoi festival or something. Wile E. Heresiarch

Moved to Yosakoi Festival; more work still welcome Fg2

Ice MC: unwikified

I've improved the article, but I think it could use a second run-through by somebody else -Frazzydee

Joel Osteen - a case of POV-itis if I ever saw one. Danny

DJ Bobo: unwikified

Martin Rees - replace quote with more optimistic one. Peter O. (Talk) I disagree. As cosmologists go, he's a pretty pessimistic one; I say leave it in. Mashford

Life_and_Times_of_MC_Beer_Bong - notable? Peter O. (Talk)

Fu (weapon) - real? Neutrality

The Chinese word for "Axe" is indeed pronouced as 'Fu', but such an entry is hardly encyclopedic.

Corneil and Bernie - wikify, copyedit

I've wikified, copyedited and NPOV'ed the text a bit, but it could do with some attention from someone who knows the series. Aecis

Eversummer Eve - npovify, format, expand. — Gwalla | Talk

The Globe image seems to have been vandalized! I have no idea how to fix that.

What image? --Aqua

Whitehat - wiki, copyedit - Mattingly23

I got most of the way through cleaning up blackhat, and then realized that hacker has a more-than-sufficient definition for both whitehat and blackhat. And the page for greyhat is not even a substub. Does it make sense to just remove the three *hat pages and just make them redirects to Hacker? Bcordes

McKinley Memorial Mausoleum - wikification - Mattingly23

I did some wikification and clean-up. But I'm wondering if the copy for this has been possibly in part verbatimed from somewhere else (it reads like a press release). ffirehorse

Krag-Petersson - Needs someone more fluent in english to work over for typos and grammar. Wikify. WegianWarrior

Lee Lawrie - the pictures are great, but the article needs page formatting and wikification. Rhymeless

Cura te ipsum - wikify Peter O. (Talk) + I added links and put some English translations beside the Latin. Smerdis of Tlön

National Institue of Engineering, Mysore - needs work

Graffiti - the list of hip-hop artists needs disambiguation.

Flesh fetish - same author as above. If kept, it should be at Flesh Fetish - Probably a non-notable garage band, delete- In my User_talk:Nabla the author, User:Kafaka, points to soulseek (http://www.slsknet.org) as a reference - Nabla

Homer Lea - consensus to send here from VfD Guanaco

Travellers' Pocket Medical Guide - unwikified, possibly inappropriate. - TB

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August 16

Dave Parker (baseball player) - npov, wikification - Mattingly23

Scion tC - Toyota fans, here's your chance to show what you know.

Gerar, Dominique Moceanu, Tim Anderson (Zork), Findochty, Eugene Krabs — NPOVing, copyedit, proofread, categorize, stub msg, - the works. Neutrality

Vendetta - too informal, needs NPOVing, etc

Computers in postmodernity - needs a lot of work, if it's worth keeping

Furious Angels - We have a legitimate stub on Rob Dougan, and now a fan has waxed enthusiastic over one of his albums. Salvage track info, etc., but remove the POV and gushy tone. JamesMLane

Life in General - "Rating: 5-stars" --rbrwrˆ

Alpha Sports - needs major expansion, last sentence is confusing, not much info on web, maybe delete? --Aqua

Seurat, Neo-Impressionism and the science of color - Nice article but needs moving (presumably to Neo-Impressionism) and conformance to standard style. Also Seurat should link to this page. -- Solipsist

Sheen Estevez - Jimmy Neutron, needs wikifying & a reason to live.

List of Apple Computer CEOs. Not sure if this should be merged with Apple Computer. Currently unformatted.

Erik Poppe - wikify. Thue | talk

Swedish neutrality during World War II - needs further cleanup and some sections describing the background on other topics needs to be broken out an possibly integrated elsewhere. A general article on Swedish neutrality policy (1809-present) is also lacking and segments here may be broken out and used as a backbone. -- Mic

Finland and Globalization - seems to be a paper or article written for another purpose and then dumped on Ireland Information Guide. May be possible to transform into a Ireland Information Guide article or be broken up and integrated into other articles. -- Mic

Australian Involvement in the Vietnam War - last one for the day. Needs NPOV, cleanup, fact checking and better structure. A good article to work on though. - Ta bu shi da yu

Oil spill - there must be much more information we can add to this page. While we're about it, can someone add to my penguin sweaters page? - Ta bu shi da yu

Béqaa and Liban-Sud need better English (and expansion). Lupo

Cocaine - this had information merged from Cocaine addiction, however this page was marked as NPOV and as needing attention. Could we get people to check the merges? The merge was sort of inelegantly done! - Ta bu shi da yu

Pharm.D. - unwikified, mostly covers Pharm. D. programs in the Netherlands --Szyslak

Wavy Gravy:article is getting there, I've kinda hit a wall on it...

  • Doesn't seem in need of cleaning up to me. Rvollmert 19:20, 2004 Aug 19 (UTC)

Alexander MacFarlane - looks like a raw entry from a biography database. - TB

Herero massacre -Articles conflicts with itself and the linked article on Herero Wars on the total number of dead. Needs updating from external links. Rmhermen

Test screening - I've linked it to a couple of things, but a film buff should really expand this article with examples and more explanation. BigHaz

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August 15

Milnthorpe: unwikified

astral plane - NPOV -Sean Curtin

Tooth braces - pov, grammar, wikification, etc - Mattingly23 - should be at dental brace Sean Curtin

  • Needs a complete rewrite, in my opinion. neatnate

List of windmills isn't a list and doesn't list any windmills. No real activity since 2002. - RedWordSmith

Cinema of Colombia just a list of films. Dunc_Harris|☺

Linn Records - Someone dropped a single sentence on us.

  • Upgraded to a proper stub --rbrwrˆ

Detection Club: unwikified + looks like it's been copied, but not yet listed as such, see talk page for details

Horizons: Empire of Istaria Allegedly looks more like an advert than an encyclopedia, so if you can de-advertise it please do. --Marco

Comilla - wikification, grammar - Mattingly23

  • Grammar cleaned up and wikification added, but still needs more info. --rcmurphy
    • Thanks, murphy, just when I was cleaning it up ;) Anyway, I added a little info. Aecis

Magic circle - has two meanings, second one added by newbie, fmt wouldn't be enough because of vagueness ("has to do", "stuff") - cesarb

  • The first meaning should really be at Magic Circle or even The Magic Circle. --rbrwrˆ
  • Yeah probably - ok now? The Land
    • Yes, much better now. Can be removed from here. cesarb

Streetstudio - NPOV, probable self-promotion. Created by anon user who did some spamming, but the "Press" section (http://streetstudio.com/press/index.html) of their website suggests it's notable so not VfD material. JamesMLane

National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration - I've updated this quite a bit, but in the process I realise it may need a bit of attention. I've basically got the data in the article, now it needs to be presented by one of our talented Ireland Information Guide users! Also: fill in the blanks of information that's missing. My suggestion is to get the material from the govt websites, NPOV and clean them up and put them in the new article. Phew! This is a long explanation for cleanup! - Ta bu shi da yu

Alice Mills, Lisbeth Lenton, Petria Thomas, Jodie Henry - wretched substubs

Memoirs of a Geisha - stubby

Cocaine addiction - can someone have a crack at merging this with Cocaine? - Ta bu shi da yu

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August 14

Alstonia: content to external links ratio very low

Monetary system Bad. Neutrality

Conrad Gozzo - entirely POV, needs complete rewrite supadawg - 30px

Qaitbay - needs serious cleanup, especially for grammar Neutrality

Phrozen Crew - needs NPOV, proper grammar and encyclopedic style Neutrality

Wei Yan - needs NPOV, possible VfD Neutrality

The Inspector - no idea what this is about Neutrality

Canadian_Natural_Resources - substub, copyvio from the company's main page --Szyslak

France#demographics, Demographics of France - POV check. Peter O. (Talk)

Essex Man - needs a less conversational style and a proper history of the term. --rbrwrˆ

Midsuruby style - some sort of martial arts business, rather confused, awful spelling, etc. --rbrwrˆ

Miami model - NPOV --rbrwrˆ

FC St. Pauli - needs more NPOV language and fact checking. sjorford

Metro Balderas -- a metro station in Mexico City. I've wikified it but have no idea what is meant by the sentence about various people involved in the Mexican Revolution. Also Metro Sevilla which I haven't even wikified --rbrwrˆ

Matt Burke -- Wikify and cleanup. MattTM

Wolf Dog -- Needs rewriting for NPOV, (and copyedit)

Paixhans --Peter O. (Talk)

Land_Value_Tax - POV check. Peter O. (Talk)

Henry_George, Georgism - needs information on criticism of his ideas Peter O. (Talk)

Dame Edna Everage - quirky writing style

  • Considering the topic, I'm not sure if that can be helped too much. Rhymeless

The Dream - needs updating to reflect its revival for the Athens Olympics

Genius needs NPOV Lady Tenar

Salinity looks pretty ugly. weird textish tables and i think those are meant to be % signs --Pengo

I replaced o/oo with ‰. Peter O. (Talk)
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August 13

American Psycho - Seems to be a lot of point of view

Rebecca Loos - tells me nothing that is not in David Beckham article. Either redirect there of add something worth reporting. Cutler

Mental image - two line stub, orphan, unwikified, not even a very good dicdef at the moment. Is there a topic here for someone to tease out? --rbrwrˆ

Jimmy Shand - smells like copyvio. Needs work. Meelar (talk)

Y.P. Varshni - article says that he is frequently cited, but unwikified and organized as a CV. Needs encyclopedic content rearranged to be an entry.

Darren Shan - badly needs NPOV (it reads like a publishers advertisement!), many many spelling errors, repeats the title, needs total reorganisation of the page, many other things need to be done. - Ta bu shi da yu

Memfrica - orphaned one-liner about a derogatory nickname. Delete? --rbrwrˆ

Bishop Kearney Field - a mess, could do with some more information and better phrasing. - Ta bu shi da yu

Melodies of Life - song lyrics. Delete? Copyvio? --rbrwrˆ

Mellish crater - idiosyncratic first-person account of how a crater got its name. Also unwikified, etc. --rbrwrˆ

Angus Tait - needs serious work, maybe listing here will motivate poster

A Course In Miracles - Criticism? Peter O. (Talk)

Kataklysm - unwikified, and maybe not sufficiently notable? Stormie

John F. Kennedy - Needs copyediting. Some parts, especially the section "President of the United States", read like an elementary school report + very US-centric. Zocky

  • Wow, who would have thought that an article about a President of the United States would be US-centric?! Sigh. RickK
  • US-centric as in including expressions like "here in United States". Zocky
  • Fair comment I believe. - Ta bu shi da yu

The Japanese Beetle - fan-POV substub. Subject probably deserves an article but this isn't it. — Gwalla | Talk

Laurel and Hardy - Surely a duo as important as this one deserves a better article. I'm sure a lot more can be said about Laurel and Hardy. Aecis

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August 12

Melting pot - In dire need of development. jengod

Fluble - pretty thoroughly fannish. — Gwalla | Talk

(The) Game - just needs some standard copyediting and wikification. Rhobite

Saigado Publishing lacks contest and wikification

Sune Sik Sverkersson Prince of Sweden - Ugh! Lack of information, incomplete, badly flowing, I only just added a stub tag! - Ta bu shi da yu

Knife - sections of this look like an information dump. Anybody willing to give it a bit of flow? Rhymeless

Videos of Osama bin Laden - badly in need of updating/expansion. discusses only 1 of the videos

Midwayer - It's already gone through VfD, so I guess now there's nothing left to do but attempt to make sense of it. Anyone know what this is about? Bryan

Doctor fish - needs wikistyle Neutrality

Nodosaurus - all the info's there, but it needs taxoboxification. Diberri | Talk - i've done so, please have a look

The Amazing Spider-Man 21 - heartfelt contrib by anon; should be a bit cleaner and perhaps briefer.

Chinese Roundabout - wikification - Mattingly23

Stanczak - wikification - Mattingly23

McDull - cleanup! Many links irrelevant, kind of confused what it's all about. - Ta bu shi da yu

Stark Law unwikified text dump from CRS Report for Congress, needs heavy copyedit + wikifying

Chicken hypnotism needs fact check and/or context

ecclesiastical new moon unencyclopaedic/ This seems more a candidate for VFD, or Requested Articles than cleanup. Joyous

Lednice unencyclopaedic, needs copyedit and context

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August 11

Soloflex - sub-stub. Company seems to exist. Lupo

Sukhomlinsky - wikify, style. Finlay McWalter | Talk


Tina Modotti Peter O. (Talk)

Jinan Incident - typos, confusing writing

Liquid Limit - needs explanation, rewording ··gracefool |☺

Labyrinth seal - needs explanation, rewording ··gracefool |☺

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August 10

Super Joy 3/3.5 - I don't really know what to say about this except "excessive".

Gobi - contains big blocks of unformatted, pasted text. 213.93.26.187

Bokeljs - Apparent Croatian bias. Peter O. (Talk)

This isn't mere cleanup matter, it's discussed at length in the talk page (though interest has subsided as of late) and borders on a PNA candidate --Joy [shallot]

1730 in gay rights - Covers a single topic spanning years 1730-1811. _R_

Phantom Regiment - Mattingly23

Hullabaloo - needs copyediting.

Jay C. Buckey - needs de-NASAfication Neutrality

Underground film - unwikified copy of Nick Zedd, though that content doesn't belong here: replace with stub

Parthasarathy Kovil - a Hindu temple, I presume. Unwikified, stubby, lacking context. --rbrwrˆ

Kyle of Lochalsh - first person

Re-written, but still POV. _R_

Francus need to know if this is history or legend. DJ Clayworth

Spousal rape, unwikified, questionable content

woodsmen - Rephrasing. Article is generally weak. --LeeHunter

Anti-Japanese sentiment - major NPOVing needed - olivier

Sublime (album) - just a track listing and a link to a cover image; unwikified

Rev. Keith R. Wright - borderline VfD. Some Google, likely to be worthy of an article, but not this highly POV and possible copyvio attempt. - Lucky 6.9

Risk: Lord of the Rings Trilogy Edition - Cute, but in need of some attention. Breezy, POV, unwikied, unformatted. Nice attempt, though. - I did some POV removal, some wikiyinf, etc. Needs more work from someone with the game. Lyellin

Mikhail Alekseev - substub. Possible copyvio/heavy borrowing.

US 89th Infantry Division, US 84th Infantry Division - need massive wikification - In fact, see Information Guide.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=4.29.210.42 all of this user's contributions (http://en.Ireland) for articles needing extensive cleanup - added introductory sentences to the various articles

Aerogami - formatting, wikification - Mattingly23

Puerto Ayacucho - wikification,etc. - Mattingly23

Puerto Rico, Demographics of Puerto Rico - Demographics section needs fact-checking Peter O. (Talk)

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August 9

Satanism - POV check

3554 Amun - Confusing asteroid stub User:Krik/norm

Silent Partner Management - substub User:Krik/norm

Triple Fast Action User:Krik/norm

Ringside Recording Studios - substub User:Krik/norm

Paulo Portas - needs wikification and some translation of Portuguese terms. + clearly an automatic translation from [3] (http://ptvip.com/notaveis/pauloportas/biografia.html). Is this a copyvio? If not I will fix it --Nabla

Pallbearer - unwikified dicdef; merge & redirect to Funeral? --rbrwrˆ + adding 'pallbearer in music and literature' info over the next few days; I'll crossref,to funeral etc. (don't merge please)

Strongarm - Mattingly23 - to Wiktionary? Srd2005

Maffeo Pantaleoni - needs a lot of work - Mattingly23

Cunning Dorx - Article could use some cunning NPOV. Spatch + did some formatting Srd2005

Shipwright - Unwikified prosebrick free to good copyeditor. Spatch

Pacific Intertie - a bit garbled in the translation from German; probably needs someone who understands heavy-duty power systems to fix it. --rbrwrˆ

Whistle walk - Mattingly23

Neiva - Mattingly23 --Wikified and NPOVed. -JCarriker

Doug Moench - ungrammatical, rambling, chatty, badly wikified. I've done some work, but it needs more than I can devote. DS -

Gig racing - Mattingly23 -- Rewrote it, needs proofing though. _R_

Rosamund Clifford - Needs merging with itself, wikification and maybe fact-checking. _R_ + did some formatting Srd2005

Peace gaming - Mattingly23

Ireland Information Guide:Boilerplate text - this page looks uglier each time I see it - Not an article; tell us how you think it works.

Nazarene - several smaller articles all merged together some redundancy.

Lipidomics - article/external link ratio is very low

Molly Elliot Seawell - author, but completely unwikified and non-encyl. + did some reshuffling Srd2005

Dead Zone - needs formatting, wikis and a minor POV-ectomy.

Dragonslayer - needs NPOV, wikification, is currently an informal movie review. Andre + wikified it a bit Srd2005

Acid productions - need wikifying and review by somebody who understands this scene. PHluid is a related article. --rbrwrˆ + Cleaned some (and moved to ACiD Productions), but needs review by someone more knowledgeable than I. --Diberri | Talk

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August 8

Pink Fairies: Way too casual tone, sometimes being POV

Picture of the Moon - needs formatting and NPOV before it veers into vanity/VfD territory. Spatch 20:01, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)

List of movies with TV shows and other movies in them - Better title?

List of recurring characters - Needs more

Philip Effiong - not quite sure what the author means, but it seems to be an important note about this person from the conflict in Biafra. Danny 17:21, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Joseph Ellis - needs NPOV work from someone who knows what the apparent controversy is. MK 15:36, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Fleshlight - promotional page for a brand-name sex toy, with some tacked-on speculation about how it empowers men; the latter might be appropriate in a general toys/masturbation article, but not here. —Hob←Talk 10:11, 2004 Aug 8 (UTC)

Dream art - This is my own new article, but I'm acutely aware of the gaps in my knowledge of the subject. Calling all art historians. —Hob←Talk 10:02, 2004 Aug 8 (UTC)

Osdev - poorly written, with varying perspective + did some formatting + cleaning. Srd2005 11:38, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)

ACME Communications - POV problems -- Blue Mask|Talk 04:58, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC) + did some cleaning. Srd2005 11:38, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)

William Balfour Baikie - seems to be a copy of an obituary --Alsocal 04:30, 8 Aug 2004 (UTC)

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August 7

Renaissance (band) - POV problems

Independent Radio - needs work

Maria Gigova--needs context and rewriting

Philippine National Railways - needs copyediting and wikifying, possible copyvio - seems to have been built up over time, copyvio less likely IMO, just a new user

This user's contributions are ungrammatical and need cleaning up

Harmony, California - OUCH! + did some formatting. funny little place, funny little article. Srd2005 17:34, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Charlie Root/Temp - an absolute mess. + did some formatting Srd2005 17:34, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Pequeninos - Mattingly23 02:20, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Dead Man's Party (Buffy episode) all need work Mattingly23 01:54, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Francois Pinault, Donald Newhouse, Hans Rausing, Alwaleed Bin Talal Alsaud, Bernard Arnault all started by someone whose an Arnault fan?? Mattingly23 00:27, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

The SCO - Linux Wars - needs NPOV, trimming repeated material. I did a lot of work on it but it needs much more. --LeeHunter 03:09, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Probably needs a rename. It's looking at a broader picture than SCO v. IBM, but there needs to be some linkage between the two. Ambi 07:31, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Benjamin Sheares - Mattingly23 03:36, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC) + did some formatting Srd2005 17:34, 7 Aug 2004 (UTC)

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August 6

Azerbaijani literature - Needs wikification, NPOVization, and fact checking. roozbeh

P'ent'ay Christianity in Ethiopia. ? Dunc_Harris|☺

Kingdom (professional wrestling) - needs rewrite and NPOVing.

Federal Election Campaign Act. Pasted in from somewhere. Includes text like "Click here to download the Campaign Guide". Needs rewriting.

James Boyle - unwikified; about to list in VfD, but was co-founder of Creative Commons. Peter O. (Talk) + did some formatting Srd2005

Holler I found this on List_of_Norse_gods. It is clearly not on topic, and needs looking at generally

John morton eshleman--copyvio? Google can't find it. Needs work. Meelar (talk) + did some formatting Srd2005

Hampi - Photo gallery a mess. User:Krik/norm

Barleycove beach in Ireland. Dunc_Harris|☺ + did some formatting Srd2005

Swift Boat Veterans for Truth needs integration of text from recent merge and desperately needs NPOV

Tatra T815 a truck. Dunc_Harris|☺

DRIV3R fmt, rephrasing + did some formatting Srd2005

Lagos, Portugal Non-native english, reads too much like a travel guide. I fixed some of it, but it could use a bit more work. Rhymeless 08:09, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)

St. Paul's School (U.S.) Needs organization.--Neutrality 05:14, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Industrial_Revolution/history - a mess; violates the "no hierarchy" rule; and should be merged into Industrial Revolution. Peter O. (Talk) - note: '"no hierarchy" rule' = no sub-pages in article namespace.

Steve Purcell this and related articles need copy-editing. Peter O. (Talk) + did some formatting Srd2005

Laird Hamilton surfer article needs copyediting. written like a fan article. + did some formatting Srd2005

Symantec Aquisitions - I moved this unwikified slab from Symantec, somebody please help make it something useful. — Ilγαηερ (Tαlκ) + did some formatting Srd2005

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August 5

Abd ar-Rahman I - 1911 piece, has had some Wikification, but could stand being broken up into paragraphs, having other people who are mentioned more clearly identified and crosslinked. -FZ

2003J6(moon)-- statistics of Jupiter's Moon 1 external link, merge into somewhere? Dunc_Harris|☺

Alva belmont notable? geaneological entry? Dunc_Harris|☺

Oliver Belmont too. Dunc_Harris|☺

NWO Hollywood - Needs work. MK 19:02, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Ha, you beat me to it. I think it would be more appropriate to merge this into nWo since it has information about it in there already. — マイケル ₪

Golden Boy - Cleanup tag added some days ago by someone else, page needs grammar cleanup and preferably some extending. Philip Nilsson

Cleaned. I won't say it's not destined for VfD anyway, but it's clean now. Geogre 17:05, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Northern California Indian Development Council - created to resolve a Information Guide.org/wiki/Ireland Information Guide:Votes_for_deletion/Job_Training_Partnership_Act VFD (http://en.Ireland). -- Netoholic

World Revolution communist (online?) newspaper - significant? Dunc_Harris|☺

Paul Chua bodybuilder substub on vfd. Dunc_Harris|☺

Fox Needs taxonomy added? TOR + cleaned it a bit Srd2005

Crystal Eastman Needs npoving and other TLC.--Neutrality + cleaned it a bit, stil pov though, imho Srd2005

M14K Just bad.--Neutrality + cleaned it a bit Srd2005

Order of St. Andrew Major cleanup needed in the Russia aisle.--Neutrality + Cleaned up a bit. Srd2005

Straw marquetry -- abandoned since 2002 Sep 22

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August 4

Static Shock - Character info is too detailed. Peter O. (Talk) 22:28, Aug 4, 2004 (UTC)

Now isn't *that* a nice criticism to have! I'd much rather see that other shows had this detailed of character information. Rhymeless 02:52, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Um, aren't we going to need a disambig really soon for the character vs. the natural phenomeon? Geogre 17:27, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
No, the phenomenon would be at lowercase S. -Sean Curtin

Keio Video Game Series

Robert Donston Stephenson - needs wikification, full sentences Rmhermen 21:29, Aug 4, 2004 (UTC) + Cleaned up a bit. Srd2005 15:29, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Stanislavski System - needs wikification, cv check, etc Salasks

Euthanasia - lots of bold statements with no sourcing, needs fact-checking/NPOV-tuning; see my comments at the end of Talk:Euthanasia. Also several sections just need a good copyedit. --Hob 17:20, 2004 Aug 4 (UTC)

Better now, though more cleaners could help. Geogre 18:17, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)

XM2001 Crusader - has some internal inconsistencies (projected developments of a cancelled program?), slight POV issues, an lots of unexplained acronyms. -FZ 17:11, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

King_Sinjong_of_Goryeo - small pitiful stub, needs more info, if possible--Ryan B. (Talk, contributions) 08:23, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Fort Bliss is about the army base, and Fort Bliss, Texas is about the nearby town also named Fort Bliss. They need disambiguation (maybe Fort Bliss, Texas (army base) and Fort Bliss, Texas (town) ?). Mateo SA

Moved from duplicate articles page:

The Dormant Commerce Clause is a distinct legal doctrine in Supreme Court case law from its rulings on Congressional Commerce Clause power. The main problem right now is just poor writing in the Dormant Commerce Clause article...it's kind of incoherent. It looks like someone just pasted in their law school essay. Postdlf 9:57 AM 3 Apr 2004 EST

Lichen pictures need cleanup Pengo

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August 3

Language of set theory Unwikified commentary. vfd if someone can't turn it into a real article. Niteowlneils

Pate Chinois - Slightly odd English, half-wikified, recipe --rbrwrˆ

Feigned madness - Bizarre biblical commentary, completely lacking in context and relevance. Mashford

Frank Weltner a quite notable anti-semite, but needs wikifying, POV runover, Dunc_Harris|☺

Sven verbeiren--apparently some kind of Scandinavian folklore (?). Real? Check writing and format. Meelar (talk) + tried cleaning it, but did it help? garbage in garbage out Srd2005 19:33, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Emu Park - substub Guanaco

Namesdays in Finland is mostly a duplicate of Namesdays in Sweden. Since namesdays are also common in other countries (e.g. Germany), these should probably be merged into a new namesday Rvollmert

Exilarch - copied from PD 1906 encyclopedia but is a huge mess, especially for someone unfamiliar with the context JFW | T@lk

John Foxx - highly POV, and suspect of being a copyvio.

John Brown Gordon - unwikified lump of what looks like copied text. At least PART of it comes from http://civilwar.bluegrass.net/OfficersAndEnlistedMen/johnbrowngordon.html

Matthijs Quast - rewrite, copied from some storybook + did a little re-arranging and research.Srd2005 19:33, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Anti-circumvention rules-Unwikified legal text. VFD? Wikisource? Change title to euro-centric? Change article to non-eurocentric (what link to here seems to want)? Change title 'rules' to 'laws'? Niteowlneils Delete. Guanaco

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August 2

The Swedish slave trade - unwikied, non-native English and possible POV.

Last meal - needs wikification. Last paragraph seems suspicious - is this tradition still upheld?

James Renwick, Jr. - unwikified, needs expansion

  • Tried my best, wikified and formatted a bit, but still is a stub.--leandros 22:28, 2 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Did some expanding. ffirehorse 05:32, 3 Aug 2004 (UTC)
  • Doesn't look bad to me now. Wetman

Artur Petrosyan - I assume he's a footballer? Can we get some prose? + added some prose and info, could not find much. Srd2005 19:33, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC) Igor Volk - unwikified chunks of text with no full sentences.

  • Vladimir Soloviyov, from same author as above. Needs full sentences, and wikification of dates.
  • Vyacheslav Zudov, another unwikified cosmonaut by same author.
  • Yuri Glazkov
tried cleaning these pages, but they remains staccato-ish Srd2005 19:33, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Sivaji Ganesan - needs major restructuring, wikifying, the works. Mike∞Storm 21:12, 2 Aug 2004 (UTC) + tried cleaning it, tough job, not sure what's POV and what reality. Srd2005 19:33, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Justice (movie) Ouch. Needs organizing and splitting of run-on sentences, better lead, spolier boilerplate, the works.--Neutrality 20:56, 2 Aug 2004 (UTC)

PzKpfw I tank class is not very readable... or should it just be merged with Panzer I? -FZ 19:40, 2 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Maggie Alderson and other useless substubs on journalists from the Sydney Morning Herald by User:138.130.0.69. If no improvement, list for vfd. Dunc_Harris|☺

Stalling, newbie dicdef mess. Dunc_Harris|☺

PictoChat is kiddie wiki about what seems to be some sort of Nintendo video game attachment. Gets Google hits, but what the heck is this? - Its a yet to be released game/piece of software for a yet to be released game console. Sideshow

Technodrome - unwikified, no context, and dubious notability. Stormie

- I rewrote almost the entire article, but could still use work

Priscilla Davis, T. Cullen Davis, Stan Farr, Andrea Wilborn -- I found their links at August 2, but I ain't sure if their murder story from 1976 should be in an encyclopedia like Ireland Information Guide. Is this a landmark trial or something like that ? What is the significance ?????? -- PFHLai

Sociedad Unitaria Universalista de España - i just wikified it... cold use more. + now Unitarian-Universalism in Spain

Escapology - good content but it's written in a chatty, 2nd-person "how-to" style, & has lots of poor grammar and mistitled links. - Hob + tried it and failed :-p Srd2005 05:03, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)

  • Cleaned the language up a bit neatnate

Devil Stick, Devil stick and all the 1000's of new orphaned reidrects to it (ok, exxageration), the article itself makes no sense, and now there's a bunch of orphaned redirects. — Ilγαηερ (Tαlκ) + Just did a somewhat radical rework of the main article, in an attempt to fix it up. Still needs work, and probably a picture as well. I think I got all the redirects fixed, but I'm not positive. Lyellin

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August 1

Arthur Omar - a mess. Could it be a copyvio?

Fado (character) another video game character. Dunc_Harris|☺

AFGNCAAP some random video game character. Dunc_Harris|☺

Pat Robertson - NPOV check

John Carmack - needs diligent NPOVing.

James Buckley - copied from the Congressional Biographies, which is acceptable, but the copier didn't bother to wikify it.

Sympson the Joiner - survived VfD, but needs help

  • I added some material from Ambrose Heal. That's all there is. Wetman

Yeshu - POV

Keech - notable?

The Disney Afternoon, Disney's One Saturday Morning Peter O. (Talk)

Dennis Watts - wikify, interlink, edit Salasks

Jayachamaraja Wodeyar Bahadur one for those knowledgeable about Indian history. Dunc_Harris|☺

Early American editions of The Hobbit - Odd title, no topic, is this encyclopedic or should it go to Wikibooks? Smerdis of Tlön

Computer art scene - copyedit to become encyclopedic -- Blue Mask|Talk

Added what I could and cleaned it up a little bit. Still needs some more info to be added. --April kathleen 17:08, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Decimal time: long and windy article, lacking readability flow -- Chris 73 | Talk

Super Mushroom - an item in the Mario game series.

Starman (Mario). Peter O. (Talk)

Behringer - orphan article.

Traffic congestion - needs to be less US-centric

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July 31

Friday the 13th: The Series - unwikied, needs formatting and slight POV-ectomy. Reads like a synopsis.

I've made an attempt at formatting and wikifying the article. Someone who knows the series should deal with the content of the article. Aecis

Visual Approach slope indicator - needs wikifying

Cleaned up Rajput (formerly Rajputs). Noticed that Meenas and Kshatriya need some work; they are awkward reading, use some antiquated terms, and lack NPOV.Tom Radulovich

I made a stab at Kshatriya fixing punctuation and some awkward sentences. Still needs some fact-checking (for example I'm not sure that Buddhism could really be called a "Kshatriya" religion) and work on the NPOV. Article also wanders quite a bit from the subject. --LeeHunter 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)
I also did some NPOVing on Kshatriya. Now we have the situation that an anonyous editor keeps re-introducing POV stuff without giving sources even referring to the talk page. Could somebody go over there and see what can be done about this? Dbachmann


List of countries by population - someone needs to update the numbers using the 2004 CIA World Factbook and turn the second set of listings into tabular format like the first

I converted the second set of listings to a somewhat acceptable table using a sed script. --Bigsmoke 01:58, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Spiritual Acts of Mercy, Corporal acts of mercy - if someone could work it into the Christian family of articles

Chak chak - Iran village w/ pic, needs to be interlinked and wikified

Benefit tourism - wikify, interlink w/other articles (it's orphaned :(

Bhargava and Parashurama should be one article. Merge and redirect to Parashurama. Parashurama needs a rewrite as well.

Brad Mahugh notable?

Friedenau needs lots of work and expansion. - Kenwarren + cleaned up, still needs expansion

American Revolutionary War a mess - has a bunch of one line sections consisting of "See [[Battle of XXXX]] and uneven coverage caused by crappy merging of 1911eb text.

Nye, Gerald P. - wiki, edit, NPOV + now Gerald P. Nye; frmt & cop ed but still rough

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July 30

Museology, dicdef. Dunc_Harris|☺

Vanua Levu - substub Salasks

Black Light District - Huh?

Moon colonization - more essay than encyclopedia. Needs formatting, wiki, slightly less breezy style.

A Message From Charity (The Twilight Zone) - Episode description. I'd put on vfd if it wasn't just created this week. Salasks

A Burnt-Out Case book. Dunc_Harris|☺

Habib R. Sulemani - Mess of links. User:Krik/norm

Krag-Jørgensen - Typos, and perhaps more links. More info on danish and american Krags would be helpful as well. WegianWarrior

Historiometry, Pithium, Poila Baisakh, Poldo tackle, Psychobiography Peter O. (Talk)

Donna DeLory - some full sentences, maybe? And who is Al DeLory? Could use some NPOVing, too. + Fixed up some of the sentences, did a bit of NPOVing. Still might need a little work, but is close as is now. Lyellin

Imperial Russia - all of the history articles linked to from here need to be wikified and renamed more concisely --Smack

Higgins - surname, unwikified. Peter O. (Talk)

Kuczka Péter - Written by a Hungarian, I originally said it was "broken English", which was a little unfair. Anyway, expand it and cleanup the text, it's a good entry otherwise. - Ta bu shi da yu +edited for grammar, timeline's still confusing Salasks

British National Party - lots of weasel words and facts need clarifying. See Talk:British National Party

Greatest Conjunction -- All in English, but unusual sentence structure. I'm not familiar enough with the topic to know how to reword it. Links to Triple Conjunction. SWAdair | Talk

James Fleming Fagan - the article has two birth years! I want to be able to add this March 1 (I've been working on this day - don't ask me why, I don't really know myself). Could someone clarify this and fix it up, then add his birth and death to the relevant pages? Thanks. - Ta bu shi da yu

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July 29

Roger Delk currently from geaneology, needs twiddling. Dunc_Harris|☺

Bank run - definition Peter O. (Talk)

AirLand battle - unformatted Peter O. (Talk)

Battle of Kadesh - merged from Battle of Kadesh, but resulting text is incoherent. Peter O. (Talk)

Happiness (movie) is unwikied, misspelled, unformatted, POV and reads like a review. Other than that, it's fine. - Lucky 6.9

Random date liberation movement, Mercer's Pillars, and Brung-Spatt Group are these jokes?

Awake - a mess, with nearly no actual content.

Agumon — a Digimon character. I did what I could, but don't know the series at all, so I can't evaluate the material. - Kenwarren

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July 27-28

David Parnas - Highly POV. He "developed professionalism"?

Amnon Rubinstein - needs clarification, maybe POV check, then copyedit

SAMU Social - is this notable? If yes, needs context

Unreleased Madonna Songs - title breaks naming conventions, merge with Madonna (singer)? , needs copyeds, wikifications - (comment by Ardonik moved to talk page)

Creativity and Manic Depression -- appears to be a student essay; rather heavy on cut-and-paste quotes from sources, and what appear to be paraphrases from the essay assignment -- needs a thorough review and copyedit, and possibly a bit of copyvio testing?

Meru, Kenya unwikified + Did some wikifying. Prolly needs a bit more work, clearing up language, making it sound a bit less like a tourist guide. Lyellin

Kris Aquino - A Filipino Ireland Information Guide user, or someone else knowledgeable, could really help cleaning up this article, tossing the POV, and stating some of this more factually. I can't do it because I only know her as Game Ka Na Ba lady. Mike H

Christmas#History_behind_Christmas - wikifying, questionable tone

Paddy Doyle - needs organizing, wikifying, pov review

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July 26

Corrugated Board needs style and wikification (copyvio?)

Postdigital - needs to be more encyclopedic and wikified. It may be a copyvio from [4] (http://ethnomus.ucr.edu/remix_culture/postdigital.htm) but I have a hunch that the author of that page is the original submitter to Ireland Information Guide. Rhobite

Raytheon Beechcraft Baron - more like an essay with technical specs. Unencyclopedic, unwikied. Lots of good information, though.

Examination Day (The Twilight Zone) - unwikified, no context beyond the subject, barely a stub. Stormie

  • Several similar articles from 68.48.167.231. I've left a welcome message on his talk page. - Lucky 6.9

Arnold Mindell-Published author's self written bio--needs npov & encyclopedic content Niteowlneils - also needs wikification

Hapa - external links need trimming, info on non-Hawaiian usage lacking (lots in history), consolidate with multiracial?

Use of sign-language by chimpanzees - unwikied, unencyclopedic, POV. Good stuff, but reads like an essay.

Jeff Gerhardt vfd consensus not reached, needs checking for pov -- Graham ☺ | Talk

Information Guide.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=Sritharan Sritharan's contribs (http://en.Ireland) are all thus far either substubs or copyvios. Please watch out for them.

Ugg boots - fmt, POV

Delegates of American Samoa to the United States Congress - Just a table - Bios should be created for them; such tables are standard & AFAIK no one has found a way of making them much more than tables so far.

The Cast Away Cat Princess' Prelude - failed to reach consensus on vfd, needs cleanup -- Graham ☺ | Talk

Cyrk - unwikified, orphaned stub; apparently a minor character from the Buffyverse. Delete? --rbrwrˆ

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July 25

Contactless - reprint from another publication? hmm... may need to delete, unless can get in touch with source to make sure they conform with GFDL.

Beyblade - needs work

Kincsem - POV subsubstub with lousy formatting and poor English about a late 19th century race horse. Start over, or delete. Lupo

Raid on Schweinfurt - capitalization, improve English, wikify, POV. Lupo

Dub (wheel) - stub, needs work

Ayrshire Coast Line, Glasgow - substub.

SNI -- unwikified text

KAD -- unwikif., starts "KAD = Korean adoptee"

Self-Monitoring, Analysis and Reporting Technology - broken English, unclear, no wikilinks

Gravitation Remix - general work; needs someone familiar with anime/manga. - Kenwarren

Official Monster Raving Loony Party - NPOV cleanup. Peter O. (Talk)

Tocumwal - substub on town in Australia

Vital currents, Yoga Sutras of Patanjali - need wikifying by someone who knows something about Yoga. --rbrwrˆ

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July 24

Who Do You Think You Are, some kind of superstar? Dunc_Harris

  • If it's Dawn French, it sure isn't a real song or a real attempt at a song. It shouldn't have its own article. Mike H
  • Along the same lines as the article Viva Forever. Peter O.

Oldehove - needs work + OK now [[User:80.127.234.122|80.127.234.122

Jerry Schneider needs expansion, organization. Pretty bare-bones as it is. Rossumcapek

2.4mR or sthg like that, type of keel boat.

  • Wikified, but might need reading for NPOV/appropriate links on the disability aspect. --rbrwr

The Medium a play; possibly need to disambiguate? Dunc_Harris

Comando Jaramillista Morelense 23 de Mayo - unwikified. problems on context and pov. requires copyediting. Blue Mask

Clifford Alexander Jr - unwikified. badly needs copyediting to make it readable. Blue Mask

  • Wikified, new intro, some rewriting. Still a very dull Curriculum Vitae, though. --rbrwr

Biodanza - some context?

Renee Geyer: unwikified and doesn't flow.

Cazasoles - needs work. Blue Mask

Nguyen Phuc Buu Chanh now wikified, but: Large chunks lifted unaltered from here [5] (http://www.orderofthedragon.homestead.com/biographiesA.html) Giano - check Bao Dai tooRick

Dylan Scott Pierce - survived VfD but much in need of expansion, NPOV

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July 23

House of Mystery, House of Secrets, Impulse (comics) - Lesser known comics from DC Comics. Peter O. (Talk)

Schreck ensemble - survived vfd because consensus was not reached. Seriously needs cleaning up though -- Graham ☺ | Talk

Emperor of America - survived vfd but consensus was to list on cleanup. May have copyvio issues. -- Graham ☺ | Talk

Natasha - about a monkey who only recently made news. Peter O. (Talk)

Jean_Graton - notable? Peter O. (Talk)

FIRSTwiki - two month old project, could be notable not sure what to do with Lunchboxhero

Bowater Forest Products - unwikified. Bluemask

Political Questions before the Siege of Vicksburg - No telling. The questions aren't political, the text smells like it came from somewhere, and it's POV.

Israel and the United Nations - royal mess, stubbish, POV, factual issues

Merf - a mere dicdef. move to Wiktionary?

Gas chromatography-Mass spectrometry - unwikified

Benaras Hindu University - unwikified

Frances_D._Fergusson - POV; notable outside of Vassar College?

Igigi, Nanium, Imi, Elulu, Shu-turul - sub-stubs.

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July 22

The Russia J